Editing Attitude

>> Friday, March 5, 2010


Sometimes I wonder, is the editing-hate I see some writers express due to it being actual WORK, or is it the negative focus/attitude that gets in the way? Both? Neither? Something else?

(When I say "editing" I'm talking about fine-tuning words and line-edits. Nitty-gritty stuff like word choice and sentence structure and how many em dashes you can get away with before beta readers come after you with torches and pitchforks. Editing, in this case, means the polishing stage. Revision and rewriting are different*.)

Confession: I used to hate editing. And I wondered why--obviously because it's fricking hard WORK, it's tedious, it requires concentration and focus, and it takes time. It's still not my favorite activity, I admit.

However, it's the way you make a draft good. And that's what I want, isn't it? A good draft that I can make spiffy and shiny and sparkling-clean for submission purposes? Yes. Okay, so I've established that editing = a better draft, which = I could submit it to markets, which = potential publication. (Which is a goal.)

So if my goal is to 1.) produce quality stories which I would be happy to share (I'll let people read first drafts, but only a few people), and 2.) reach a wider audience via publication, then I must learn to edit and I must have a positive attitude.

Why the attitude adjustment?

Bitter and angry and hating on something does not make it fun to do (unless you have that kind of personality, I guess). Oh, sure, there are bad days, and there are areas in a manuscript that incite bookhate, etc. I get frustrated when perfectionism kicks in and I don't produce a perfect draft the first time. Yeah, guilty. It's a hard monster to beat (again and again because it's like horror movie sequels and franchises--IT NEVER DIES). However, in general... liking what you do makes it easier to improve and do it more often.

A positive attitude and focus on (positive) goals may not make the editing less work, but it will make it easier and more appealing. Yes, I have days where I fall back into "teh hateness." But trying to stay upbeat and keeping a positive attitude makes editing easier. (It also helps if you love the story you're working on.)

Working off that theory, if I look at editing as a hateful, dire process that-oh-god-who-came-up-with-this-in-the-first-place-naggh rather than focus on my final goal (if I do the bloody hard work and get this story sparkling, it might have a chance) I'm pretty sure I won't get anywhere useful, or if I do, it'll be full of stress and bad moods and random innocent zombie bystanders will be incinerated.

That's just not fair to the zombies.

Thus, I'm learning to have a better attitude towards editing. I'm even starting to enjoy it. It's a necessary part of the craft. It's how we turn crappy drafts into readable stories. It's part of the process if you want to become a professional writer.

It may not be easy and there are days it will not be fun. I have a lot to learn (as always) and there's no guarantee the work will pay off on any particular story.

Despite all that, I'll continue to work on my attitude towards editing. Think of the zombies, after all.

~Merc

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*Christy asked in the comments what my definitions of "revision" and "rewriting" and "editing" are, for reference. Here you go:

-revision = big changes. Adding scenes, adding/cutting/combining characters, rearranging large parts of the novel, fixing plot holes, etc. Your big lifting and large-scale fixes in a story.

-rewriting = starting over from scratch, whether it's a single scene or the whole novel. I differentiate the two because you can revise a story or novel without necessarily scrapping the entire daft and beginning all over. Maybe "redrafting" would be a more accurate term...?

- editing = micro changes. Fixing words, sentences, punctuation, smoothing tiny details, tweaking pacing, trimming excess wordage, etc. The polishing stage to make the prose sparkle and read smoothly.

20 comments:

Inkblot March 5, 2010 at 3:24 PM  

*waves Merc flag*

Great advice. Methinks me needs to file it and read it often B-) Yay!

Also, my word verification is 'steale'. Bwa ha.

Merc March 5, 2010 at 3:34 PM  

Glad it helps, Inky. *amused at word verification*

Christy March 5, 2010 at 3:49 PM  

Hey Mercky,

What a wonderful reminder that editing is a necessary process, and we shouldn't hate on it. I personally don't mind editing.

So. For verifications purposes, what is the difference between revision, rewriting, and editing?

C.

Merc March 5, 2010 at 4:02 PM  

Christy--

I'd say it goes like this (and this is just my definition):

-revision = big changes. Adding scenes, adding/cutting/combining characters, rearranging large parts of the novel, fixing plot holes, etc. Your big lifting and large-scale fixes in a story.

-rewriting = starting over from scratch, whether it's a single scene or the whole novel. I differentiate the two because you can revise a story or novel without necessarily scrapping the entire daft and beginning all over. Maybe "redrafting" would be a more accurate term...?

- editing = micro changes. Fixing words, sentences, punctuation, smoothing tiny details, tweaking pacing, trimming excess wordage. The polishing stage to make the prose sparkle and read smoothly.

Thanks for bringing that up, Christy--I'll edit the post to include my definitions for reference. :)

~Merc

Liana Brooks March 6, 2010 at 6:22 AM  

I hate editing, in part, because it's self-torture. There's a part of me screaming that I wouldn't have to edit if I could just be perfect the first go around. If I weren't such a lousy writer, I wouldn't have to edit.

That hurts.

And editing is hard anylytical thinking rather than just free-flow creating. I like creating, free-wheeling and spinning stories. The editing bit where you break down the stories, clean the gears, and shake out the flab is hard.

Kind of the difference between eating a huge, delicious piece of chocolate cake and getting up at 6am to work off that extra 1000 calories you ingested. Yes, it can be done, but it's going to be painful and it means losing sleep.

I'm trying to adjust my attitude. I'm trying to bribe myself with shiny colored pens and the promise that it will be worth it in the end.

Fear still gnaws. I'm still terrified I'll get it wrong and the beta-readers will chase me down with pitchforks and flaming betamacs, but I'm trying.

Merc March 6, 2010 at 10:01 AM  

Liana, I'm pretty sure your betas would only use brooms and flashlights. O:)

Yes, it's hard, but picture your books on shelves one day--all edited and shiny, with cool cover art.

Adjusting attitude may take time, of course, but good for you for working at it.

AjFrey March 6, 2010 at 7:09 PM  

I no longer edit in red ink. I use blue or purple, something happy. Red is such an angry color, and the fact is I caught it, I fixed it, and I'm making it better. Nothing angry about that.

Every round of edits makes the novel that much stronger.

Merc March 6, 2010 at 7:18 PM  

AjFrey--I'm fond of red, but I agree that other colors can be much more positive. ;) I love to play with markers, so the trick is not to use so many different shades, I forget what each one was for, lol.

*must resist the shiny of 87 zillion colors*

Chrystalla March 7, 2010 at 5:47 AM  

I much prefer editing to rewriting, actually.
the zombies help, too, I agree. :-)

Courtney Johnson March 7, 2010 at 8:59 AM  

Great post, Merc, and really refreshing to read right now. I'm in that odd stage where some things need revision and some things just need edits. I can't seem to easily divide the two, as I really just want to go through the novel chapter by chapter.

Exhausting.

Some days are better than others though, and it's the little things along the way that make it easier to keep going.

Little things like remembering that all other writers suffer through it too. ;)

Wulf March 8, 2010 at 6:48 AM  

I think my experience in martial arts has influenced my views of editing and revision. It didn't take long to learn that the more I discover, the broader the path became (i.e. the less I actually knew). It's such a constant process of improvement, habit by habit, muscle by muscle...

So in this way, I approach most everything now with the mindset that "This is where I am now, but I won't stay here." And I expect both that tomorrow I'll be better at writing to apply to what I wrote today, and that also I'll find new flaws in tomorrows work to correct with the wisdom I gain in the future.

It can become overwhelming to think this way, but acceptance of our constant struggle to grow, along with all its setbacks and plateaus, is a cornerstone of mastering the craft.

Merc March 12, 2010 at 8:54 AM  

Naturally, Chrystalla. ;)

Thanks, Courtney. :) It's funny how shared misery is sometimes comforting, lol. Good luck with the edits/revisions.

Excellent comparison, Wulf! I like that way of thinking about it. Thanks for the comment.

Jay March 16, 2010 at 7:31 PM  

I am truly an oddball in that I don't mind editing at all. There's two reasons, I think. One is because I'm just thrilled to have gotten the first draft finally out of my head and onto the page. Weight has been lifted. The other reason is that editing is a mechanical process for me. Can it be tedious? Sure. But I've never had writer's block or worried about the "muse" when I'm editing.

Merc March 16, 2010 at 7:33 PM  

That makes sense, Jay.

I begin to suspect I know more writers who hate editing, and they are the ones who don't read my blog. *grin*

T.D. Newton April 13, 2010 at 12:05 PM  

Merc, are you alive?? It's been awhile since you posted last. Hope everything's okay.

Merc April 13, 2010 at 2:27 PM  

Thanks for checking in, Todd. :) I appreciate it. Yup, I'm doing fine--just moved back to MN, actually, so I'm still getting settled in and trying to get decent net connection. I shall try to begin posting again next week. :)

Authoress April 29, 2010 at 4:29 AM  

Great blog post! For the record, I ADORE editing. This first draft stuff is for the birds. :P I've got about 4 more weeks 'til this baby's done, and after it takes a short nap the FUN begins!

Love your writing style. And...you have a FACE! :D

Merc April 30, 2010 at 11:12 AM  

Thanks, Authoress! :)

I'm definitely learning to enjoy editing more, especially when the drafting stage gets hard. ;)

aimeestates May 22, 2010 at 2:00 PM  

Time heals all wounds--especially those caused by paper.

Merc May 22, 2010 at 2:02 PM  

Haha! Excellent bit of advice, aimeestates. ;)

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